Hey Neighbor! There's a cobweb on your car Looks like you don't drive too far It's just a little bit bizarre You even have one Hey Neighbor! Get that junker off the street For my eyes it is no treat Seeing it towed would be so sweet My idea of fun Hey Neighbor! I see that patch of weeds It's beginning to make seeds But no matter what my screed You just don't mow it Hey Neighbor! Would it hurt to plant some grass? I don't want to sound too crass But get off your lazy ass Take pride and show it! But don't you dare turn the tables And point out all my foibles Equating me with you As if that's even true Hey Neighbor! Perhaps we are the same We all carry the blame And have to face the shame Of our inaction Hey Neighbor! Please let me lend a hand Together take a stand And all goodwill expand Please accept my redaction
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@coolparadiso - 2024-07-05
ha a ha this made me smile , some cool rhymes and the pointing out of all the little foibles - very well done
@metalfoot - 2024-07-04
Liked the way the calling out of the neighbour turned into self-reflection.
@nahlej381 - 2024-07-04
Masterclass. Loved every word. So relatable.
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