Empty Space
From the work FAWM September Song Sprint 2026
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Empty space is a place I go when I'm trying to write a song
The page is blank, the words exist, but together they don't belong
I find a line, I find a rhyme, and in time I have found a tune
It may be something at the back of my mind, don't rush it, it's still too soon
The words assemble on the line, the tune begins to gel
"Will it make sense" I start to think. It's still too early to tell.
Distraction here, interruption there, I'm trying to set a pace
The only thing that keeps me going? A return to the empty space.
I feel as though I can't connect
The dots that appear on the page
It crashes down, a total wreck
The pressure brings only some rage
But then in a flash, inspiration succeeds, a melody starts to form
The chords reemerge, the words all align, at last the song is born
The instruments sing their own harmony, the drums help it march along
And now as from nothing, that empty space has just become a song
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Written 9/13/2026
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@chris_buono
Dug the cute in this, @rdlinder , and how the "simple" brought this one forth for you!
Such a write's theme can apply to so many, and w classic-telling lines like: "Will it make sense" I start to think. It's still too early to tell./Distraction here, interruption there, I'm trying to set a pace/The only thing that keeps me going? A return to the empty space." How you've bottled in that grouping that age-old, self-doubt question: "Am I good enough?" Clever.
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